i am laughing at your face right now...
well, i would be if you were here
honestly, it's a good poem
but it's lacking in experience
with all of the
word placements...
and strategic grammar
and flow
it's a good poem.
but at the same time
it's one of the most horrible things
i've ever read in my entire life.
you've never done any of that.
why don't you try writing something real?
something believable.
i can understand that we're different people
but i'd rather write a shitty poem that came from my heart
but maybe that's the huge barrier between
you and i.
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